Sure, here's the corrected version with the appropriate verb tenses:
1. Did you go to visit Declan when he had just moved to Cork?
2. My parents were having dinner when I called them.
3. I finally received the book I had ordered two months ago!
4. He woke up late, so he missed his train and didn't make it to the airport on time.
5. The film had started by the time he arrived.
6. Tom hadn't finished his Master's yet when he got the job offer.
7. We had just arrived at the event when I got the phone call from Lisa.
8. You were living in Dublin when you first met Jago, weren't you?